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Old 05-08-05, 04:08 PM   #7
~Lady Fiya~
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From: chi-town
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My Insides Feel Like there Being Shred and Torn Apart..
I cant Restart My Life When i will Lose the Love in My Heart..
I Beg of You to Give him Life Hes my Heart Cant you Se..
As It May Be My Only Wish Let Him Come Home to Me..
^^my favorite part out of the whole thing..

i like the set-up... your imagery was there, structure was a nice build-up.. not even close to sloppy. this was a dope piece, the content was very well thought out, your effort is shown..

-GW
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