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IP:
Damn this was really deep ..Sorry to read what happened.
You had lots of emontions , good feelings going into this drop..
Nice vocab , and good structure.. you had lots of imagery..
The thing that made this peice very good , was all the
emotions you had in this piece.. everyone who reads this
peice will realize how much you loved her..and how
it surprised you when she died..stay up ,
and drop a link
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