listening

lol.. werd.. marching at the begining..

wow.. very nice beat.. but lil long for intro..

vers 1: nice multi's man.. pretty good.. your quality is pretty good or just good.. ur flow is on point.. some parts are jst a lil on flow.. how the hell can u breathe between em lines?? lol shyt.. it seems like theres no space for breathing haha..

Verse 2: acuity.. umm ur flow is okay.. but doesn't really sound like u rappin.. should show more emotion.. ur lyrics is good.. but jsut how u rap aint that good.. basiclly know how to show emotion.. and you don't stand out on the mic.. so get practice on that..

7/10

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