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Old 05-08-05, 07:05 PM   #13
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Voted For: Non Capisco

fables-nice imagery n pretty good vocab throughout..
good use of the topic, definately stayed on track
the points i wasnt feeling was the ryhmin, i kno its not
tottally relevent in poetry but it helps follow the verse
as a whole in my opinion....thats basically 1 point i wasnt feeling on your drop.
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non capisco-i liked your approach on this topic more to start with, imagery was solid , you protrayed the topic to a T..
i appreciated the fact you ryhmed in most of your bars n your complete drop was very easy to follow....
both had good drops but i was feelin caps more so, just more work was put into it..
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!