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Old 05-08-05, 10:20 PM   #5
Triple_N
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WHOA at the improvement of ya quality...I can understand your words now....I am loving the sample on the hook....ya flow is better but still not smoothe....some of ya lines is still a lil too long....an ya focusing too hard on delivering ya lyrics good...ya delivery isn't natural sounding yet....u still sound uncomfortable on the mic but you have greatly improved an ya track is def. listenable...keep it up fam.....overal this is 6.5/10.....stay up..........1
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