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Old 05-08-05, 11:24 PM   #15
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Voted For: Non Capisco

this was a dope battle...............

non capisco.........u had a nice drop and i know in poetry battles it don't matter if it don't rhyme but you still had ures doing that which made it flow through a little better. the idea was nice and ya stayed on ya topic all the way through, vocabs was nice to, some complex shit there. a lot of feeling in the verse man and ya did well to deliver the image of the topic through ya words so overall 8/10

Fables......nice drop, ya didn't rhyme yours but it still was nice. vocabs was decent to and ya stayed on topic throughout. ya had some nice feeling in ya drop to and i cud definitely picture what you was trying to deliver, i thought the topic was a decent one cuz ya can approach it many different ways i just think that capisco came a it better and the fact that he rhymed his to made it flow just that little bit better. overall 7/10

V/ - Non Capisco
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