this was a good piece, a very good one....i couldn't ever think of a topic like that....the imagery was there....the emoton....i mean it all went together well....and i also liked your rhyme scheme.....like C.AL.I. said it should be stickied...i will read the other thing later butnow i'm tired so i am goin for a nap lol....and it's nice to see someone religious on this site.....

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