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Old 05-09-05, 12:56 PM   #28
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Voted For: GKillaz05

mettas=killa
punches=killa
wordplay=killa
personals=killa
overall=killa

ya punches were harder n made alot more sense, although that shit about fat joe was a bit fucked up, didnt make much sense but the rest of ya verse was strong enough to beat him. Blac out man you need to sort ya structure out n learn how to incorporate wordplay n punchlines proparyly ite peace. rtf,http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=188270