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Old 05-09-05, 03:58 PM   #21
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Voted For: Bonecollector

bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin
aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin
Um, No...3/10
ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame
cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname
Nah Kid...4/10
rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard
cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved
Ok...Not Hard Hittin Tho...4.5/10
u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done
so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one
I Dont Get It....4/10
they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch
I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit
Best Line......5.5/10

Needs Work Buddy....Now Bone....

Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit...
Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit...
Tight Open Line...6/10
....Untouchable huh?...
......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble....
.......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble....
Ahhh Dat Was Aight...Didnt Hit Too Hard...5.5/10
Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!...
Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?...
Dis Line Was Straight...Was Feelin It...6.5/10
............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign...
Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain...
Jeah Dats A Nice Line Son....7/10
...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain...
Like how'd i lose? but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain...
Aha Nice Close....6.5/10

Punches- BoneC
Personals- Tie
Creativity- BoneC
Wordplay- BoneC

Its No Contest, He Took Da Opener & Closer, His Middle Was More Enjoyable, Had More Punches...Personals, And He Used Some Creativity...Evo Didnt Get As Creative Wit His Verse So....v/ BoneCollector

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