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Old 05-09-05, 04:17 PM   #29
Kawn Flixx
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Voted For: D523

Pretty weak battle but i think d523 got this one...osb just came wack ... nothing much to say about this could have been alot better

D523
Hi guys, Im One Step Beyond, I think imma good emcee and a hardcore thug
I see my rhymes as dope, but then again i overdose on hallucinogenic drugs
Decent Opener
Your teeth are cracked from bitin those lines, this kids a rookie i got a hunch
Because all of his lines are like the old Batman movies-- "Wack" "Punch"
Could have been alot better

Im sure you can envision how my words hit with precision
My shit will effect you like glaucoma, you'll loose your vision
Nice punch good multies
You can call me a bookie, the way i took bets for me to win against this rookie
Ill have you dismembered, crumbling apart like a soggy cookie
pretty cool , nice meta
We all look at your lines, and we cant help but laugh humorously
Stupid bitch, you are right, you are One Step Beyond.. stupidity
LOL
Ten lines and i merked you, I know you like the shit i spit
So after this battle if you want my verse, ill give you it
Nice closer , but alittle self glorious

OSB
plan on doin somethin with your life, but you'll fail college,
thats why this 'bitch blows' like he was dryin his nail polish,
Weak Opener
doctors scope the situation, but fail to give you enough stitches,
got the premature flow, cause if i get 'touched' i 'BUST' BITCHES,
WHat?!
your open mic is washed up, its not somethin they wana try to see,
cause after 5 hours of droppin the shit, the only reply was me,
okay personal
your wholes crews hypocrites, casper thinks he the Capitain Thug,
and you said i talk shit and i do, but atleast i can back it up,
NO, wack
wanna be an internet gangsta, well the semi opens sluts souls,
M.O.B. is a bunch of faggots... With Many Open Buttholes,
Nice , best line in your verse
i fucked with you and Ca$per, but i think im givin up in two sec.'s,
cause if i fuck with 1 i fuck with all, and i ain't fond of group sex...
decent closer

Overall D523 got this he came with harder punchlines , Osb just came played and weak , if osb came harder, he would have one this battle , but ima have to to hand this one to d523 ... keep it up and elevate both
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