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This was a really nice peice .. i was really feeling it
Nice stuff ma , you had nice imagery..
Very nice flow made the verse run smoothly..
structure was alittle off..next time try to match up
your bars ..and not make one line longer then the other ,
sorta makes a bar look stretched but it was still good dont get me wrong..
Nice emotions , and good feeling going into your peice..
You had a nice concept, good vocab and wordplay
Overall keep it up , and hope to see some more om's from you
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