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Old 05-09-05, 05:21 PM   #30
Spoken Word is Bond
 
 
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originally posted by Daz
^^^take in to consideration this type of format and
style of writing on rv is new to him, that is one of themain reasons
he got such good feedback... not sure if your a vet or just a noob that thinks
he knows what hes talkin bout but realistically it was a good piece and all
the people that said it ws a 10/10 are not very good themselves...

I think most people are familar with the format he used. The AABB rhyme
scheme is the nothing new, it's pretty typical on any board in various
styles of writing; Text battles, om's, poetry, etc. But don't get me wrong
man what i said wasn't any way shape or form meant to be negative, so
there's no need to defend him. I was just merely saying that in my
personal opinion people should work towards maybe giving some criticism
as opposed to pure props being that's what helps us all truly elevate our writing. I wasn't trying to take away anything from his piece. And no
I'm not claiming to know everything, just stating opinion but i'm also
not a noob. I mean after all we're in the same crew.
Anyways, sorry Sweft for clogging your thread, i promise i'll edit
in a dope reply later.
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