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Originally Posted by Bonecollector
ROFL at the punchlines..
But yeah this was a good peice.. i was really feeling it
It had lots of emotions , and nice feeling ,
good imagery , and nice wordplay
you had nice vocab , and good worden of your bars
structure was alittle of but it was okay,
Overall this was a nice peice.. had lots of feeling
and emotions , nice imagery ..could have used alittle work
You had a nice concept ,Keep it up
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