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Old 05-09-05, 07:07 PM   #1
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It had an easy flow to follow and it had alright multies too. Here were some of my favorite lines:

unnatural rape, God couldnt help him escape, he rather face hell than Heavens gates
life's lovin he hates, boundaries create, cause him 2 feel so out of place

and

bone structure "sinks" but not every physical memory of him will "drown"
not once didnt we frown, but now that he's gone it gave us a reason 2 smile

Overall nice drop.
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