halla if i should go with the style posted and what ni need to d o to improve my battle flows halla





New style of poverty

Amount of silence is violence in the eyes of pov//

Are life’s not Ares we’ve been plotted for god// :

Metaphors similes are simple ta see but lives hard//

That why its easy to die believe me relaxed when you part// :

I spent moments just moping because of love//

But really we o it to the man above// :

And for what he gave use just braces use and all in//

Hopeful imp for given for the shit am involved with// :

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