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IP:
This was a pretty decent drop
i was really feeling it,
All had some nice concept, good feeling
Structure was pretty off , it moved around in every verse
You had some nice mutlies, felt that you can could
have used better worden in your verses , and better vocab
simplicit but it was still good , overall pretty decent drop work on
vocab and wordplay , and how you word your verses,
and try to match up your bars , so it can catch the readers attention
Drop a link! or you know what!
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