Nice piece right here. Strongest aspect was the emotion without a doubt and I like the concept with the division between sad and smile. It really brings out the contrast and at the same time the love he had for his mom. You found a good balance in your vocabulary, everything was understandable and portrayed a clear image inside the reader's head. Flow was good due to the multis you were using, imagery was okay...could be slightly better here and there though but overall, great piece!

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