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Old 05-10-05, 12:31 PM   #26
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Voted For: Big City

mettas=big
punches=big
flow=tied
personals=ack
creativity=big
concepts=big

yo big ya first lines was played! so dont use it again, n the next 4 lines were wack but the last 5 were decent shots with good wordplay, I liked that guirila black line man, that was dope^^.good job. Ackrite man your only line that I liked was the gravilty law line, had a good flow to it but apart from that you need to get better concepts n better punches.peace, rtf coz I got a really old battle that needs to be voted on, thx http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=188270