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Old 05-10-05, 01:11 PM   #11
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Voted For: 9th Degree

aight, dont get me wrong, this was a good battle and all, but 9th's verse was killer

jimmy, not bad man...see you're kinda gettin back into the rhythm, but seriously, alot of the shit was just whack, or else your wordplay ruined it, no hate or anything, but lines looked like they would be good, then the punch just killed it, nothing really that special in here either, no personals, at all, which really hurts........had good structure and flow though, if that counts for anything, but keep up man

9th, nice verse man, i was laughing at alot of your lines, i kinda thought your last line was a little whack/stretched, worded at little weird, but still, overall, this verse dominated, haha, good personals, nice punches.........personals were what really killed in this one though, good job man, keep up fo-sho

v/9th degree
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