senser, good chorus, always got something hott
cali- flow is betta... but still sucks, voice is horrible, sounds like u crying or taking it in the ass, doesnt match the beat... Some of da lyrics were ight, but alot of times u rhyme just to rhyme = lame
senser- good quality, good flow, and lyrics were ight, u threw a dope line every here and there, keeps attention
Chorus is good, but doesnt gett addictive
Beat is ight, not a huge fan but its ight
Dv quality ehhh lol, a lil betta wif the P's and B's u know. Lyrics ight, but hard to hear what u saying sometime. emotion everywhere not consistant. u can tell u record each bar seperate.. its ight
overall....
it was an ok track, if u up'd the quality and if cali had flow and a man's voice..

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