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05-10-05, 03:32 PM

Dervla

Poet's Daughter.

Posts: 360

IP:

Blah. Your sentence needs to be worded correctly. The imaginary was ok, needs to be upp a little. The emotion of this verse was ok also should work on that also. The format you done was coo, you right it does be "powerful" if you master it? But it was a bit short and it was a good poem though, keep writing.

PS: battle me, get @ me on pm or aim. Peace thank you.

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