i liked the beat and intro, flow is a lil betta but u still need work, seems to forced or fake
just spit like how u would wifout a mic, sometimes when u step to the mic u may try to hard..
lyrics are ight, nothing CRAZY, quailty is ight, chorus is ok, i see where u going wif it
overall 6.6/10
flow needs help and presence

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