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Old 05-10-05, 09:53 PM   #43
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Voted For: Kin*Ethicâ„¢

ight kin takes this .....but take out all the bolds "l" <- that shit , italics .....other than that an alright verse...overall your getting my vote because your vocab and wordplay were a lot better than your... opponents

typical. your verse was well.."typical" try to switch up and get more creative with your verse and punches....

overall kin you lost alot of the effect cuz of your crazy ass edits but otherwise alright verse

vote//kin
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