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Old 05-10-05, 09:55 PM   #13
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Voted For: Flowin_Phantom

Flowin phantom had way more effective understandable lines you could've made them better with more Vocab but ur best line was He "sticks to the net" Like " arachnids" that junk was tight punchs we're pretty soft but u had the meta's and thats why im givin this to u ur personals were'nt realy active enough but stilll....l.


Evil that was so simple of a verse u really didint try cause ur flow was flowing but everything connected to the flow was straight garbage dogg ur personals where are they?? punches weak structure normal nothing to brag about still got to got with ma man Flowin Phantom wit good stuf V/Phantom.
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