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Old 05-10-05, 11:20 PM   #6
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Voted For: Zechariah

cas
haha man ya shit never made since bruh, try get yo shit up man you need to get better vocabulary with them wack ass rhymes yo, you also need rhyme scheme like other nigg, man try and get better shit your structure was terrible, over all you need to elevate

Zech
ha ha nice verse man you had some hott lines here it made since unlike the other dudes verse you had some nice use in multi's which was an upper hand in this battle plus your structure was neat and clean, you had some okay vocabulary pretty good for a new guy, try to elevate on punches though good verse man
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