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Old 05-11-05, 04:15 PM   #23
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ok dis was an ok piece it was very good at the end it got borin no offense i loved hell fire line he really impoved since the first time he got here nice elevation line ya verse was decent could of impoved vocab doe keese i like ya verse also very very creative and it made me laugh a little the last two verse i really didnt like could elevate a lil and d523 lol funny verse even doe i didnt like it good open mic to all of yall
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