blah....decent piece.....u had some played lines in there....

I spit meta6's, so im unlike the ordinary, im the |next level|
mattafact, im the guy 'fuckin u up' so much I seem like a |sex devil|
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'this is how I do' cuz I got 'game' like im |'aftermath'|
u dickryders grippin each other's 'balls' so hard it's like a |'shaq' attack|

^^^^played.............

then you had some good ones

y'all spits is a 'disease' |anciently played| like hospital |patients wit 'aids'|
u couldn't think proper wit a 'hair on ya head' cuz ur rhymes is |blatantly 'shaved'|
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and my flow is mind boggling so u'll prolly get 'amnesia' now|'remember' dat|

that was a nice line...overall it was a decent piece...its good to stay consistent through your drops...u got potential...just work on your structure..and stop puttin ur multis between | |.........its real annoying

overall/4/10

keep elevatin

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