it was short and sweet
could of expanded it a lil bit

the point u was tryin 2 get across
was kinda a toss up
but i think i got it....but u need 2 make your words
a lil more vivid....but you a poetry queen
so i cant tell u nuthin really till i get on your level

but this was nice...could of been longer

*Nuff Said*

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