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This was a pretty good read..
i as feeling it , your flow and vocab was okay not the best
but it was good , emotions and feeling was good , felt
that you could have used more deep wording , and make more
imagery for the reader, so he can visulize what is happening , in your peice..
Overall it was pretty good..
and i help it was an okay read , alittle long but it was worth it , good drop
keep it up
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