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Old 05-11-05, 10:59 PM   #6
p4ntzistheish
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Voted For: Flowin_Phantom

-This is an LFS Review-

Let's begin....

Flowin Phantom

Don't test me man, forreal my tech will rip him
And "Evil will Be Gone" like an exorcism

Decent....

Your text is quite wack kid, but I like practice
Evil will never go big.................................
.............He "sticks to the net" like "arachnids"

I'm assuming this goes together...if it does...not that good...

You readily strapped? Bring the heat, I don't stress wit a gat
Your verses "pull as many punches" as a "wrestlin match"

Nice...

This kid is a menace, so Evil endin' up winnin
"wont happen" like the "Chicago Cubs winnin' the pennant"

Clever...

Let's move on to the other verse

evil

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im going easy on this victim just cuase he new to the game
he’s not dope he’s wack, just like his fucking noob name

Dont get it

my verse gonna make you not see so its like looking in mist
how is this fag phantom gonna battle me when he don’t exist

Umm not that good

………………I know im gonna beat this herb its just a fact
……………Like phantom of the opera he just a fucking act

[b]Pretty good...cept for the dots lol

Overall: I give this to Flowin cuz he wrote more so he had more to even out his verse....evil u had to come HARD foronly 6 lines....and you didnt...i wanted more....this was a decent battle...RTF OR I WILL NEVER VOTE OR LEAVE FEED FOR YOU AGAIN!!!!
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