This is a dope, heartfelt, well spoken poem man, you captured a lot of emotion in this piece, you definately have gotten better at portraying you're thoughts onto paper...good shit all around, some minor spelling issues but not bad that the reader can't understand you or what you tried to say, i was feeling this, keep dropping.1

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