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hahaha, fuck tha.. frail.. shit! cuz when tha coke come in i gotta use tha scale they use to weigh tha whales with.. yea that was the original lyrics not urs, lets peeps urs n see if they live up to that...lol ya voice is sooo funny sounding... damn my player isnt workin so ima download it n listen... aight, ya on flow slightly, ya punches are booty tho, half bitch like mermaid...ehhh... not realy feelin when ur tryin to hit there... i know ya going to the prom an...l..o..ll?? i think that alot of these punches completely missed me... what duz prom have to do with n e thing?i heard from a source that u ain't even unsinged hype best line yet....stay with wires like a telephone pole that lines aight... so far u arent attacking me tho, ur just throwin out a bunch of punches that arent even tru, if u wanna get at me then u should attack me for tha things that are reall..... cuz so far u just spittiin babbleish lies...i know u suck at rap but u ain't gotta blame ya sister... i dont have a sister dog... its seems to me like ya just throwin together a bunch of words that rime but dont make sence whatsoever...u want beef dog then shit, rape males... yea i guess i did kinda rape u huh?? lol...damn, i didnt spot one clever peice of wordplay or punchline material man... honestly im a little bummed..... thought u would come harder but im glad to see that after 2 weeks you finaly at least posted after duckin me that whole time... just sad that you had to work on this peice for 2 weeks n this is all u came wif.. i did my diss within 12 hours that u posted u were gonna diss me n mine still raped urs....lol at ur voice again... dam u need to get ur own style man, u tryin to sound just like lloyd banks..... like how u say ur ending rime syllabols is always tha same...n its just like banks, u need to switch it up to ur own steez man... honestly the only good thing i can say about this is that it rode the beat nycely but lyrically this was garbage u need to learn how to not "Just write what rimes" and throw together sum honest hard hitterz...