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Old 05-12-05, 05:23 PM   #1
Kirk
Peace, Love, Unity
 
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"Past to Present"

IP:

I wrote it to "Dear Summer" by Jay-Z



Relationship ups and downs,
Although most collapse,
I got a few stories to tell,
Let me show you the past...



I've shortened a few relationships, a pinch of the portion,
Where my bitch was annoyin, not a very fortunate youth,
tortured the few you been with, being unfortunates true,
Reconsidering my thoughts, actually it was more than a few,
Wish i had known the result of an attempted abortion,
Before spendin a fortune tryna believe i'm important to you,
Behind those innocent lines is a criminal mind and,
I was blinded cause I've never seen someone as gorgeous as you,
Reminded every so often... you've been paintin an image,
Let me sit at the table a minute, as you forgin the truth,
But absorbin the truth hurts worse than psyhical pain,
Little remains that feels worse than being broken in two,
Theres little to gain... when everythings in the drain,
Feelin ashamed, women deranged, and simply hopeless too..



Relationships my collapse,
But this one I won't let it,
I got a few stories to tell,
Let me show you the present...



Picturing them beautiful eyes, the original perfect couple,
Cause when Kirks in trouble, an angel is you in disguise,
Take 2 and divide it by one, continues to be 2 genius,
So when someone get between us its still you by my side,
Not cloudin my sight to know that forever you'll stay,
With a relationship that never fades in and out like the tides,
Simply stays the same, so before we change your name,
Lets promise that we'll remain the same while never doubting our ties,
My angel coming out from the skies, and if shes crowded with lies,
I hope she asks me if its true before pouting her eyes,
She knows i'd be loyal to her, and trust me before rumors and,
My baby girl can humor them... she knows the truth from the lies,
Who right in their mind would give up such a deliteful and kind,
Girl whos also sweet, and through the months is rightfully mine,
Shes frightened at times, but she know i want her so long,
And if loving hers wrong... then baby im likin these crimes...




Structure is wack, I know. But don't hate the style. If you don't understand how I was flowin to it then don't even bother posting feedback. Just basically speaking of my last girl compared to my new one.




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