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Old 05-12-05, 06:06 PM   #4
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Originally Posted by Bonecollector
This was a pretty decent drop ,
I was feeling it, Your structure was perfect
Wordplay and vocab was good , felt it could be alittle better though
Nice Creativity..titles Juelz though but okay lol,.
Nice meta's really feelin it , made your verse really good
Flow was on point.
Overall nice drop ..keep it up


Jeah Good Lookin Kid......I Used Juelz Title Cuz It Went Wit Da Concept......But Stay Up Tho
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