Voted For: hotshh!

Chose Winners Verse:

All my votes are Liable.......cause you be snitching for Survival
Marv dropped so many dimes, he got a bank account with 5-0
Nice Bar could be better worded tho...
So of course marv J "runshit"....... he too broke for a Whip!!
Da last time u hopped on anything dat move, was Strobe Dick
I'm feeling that set up and the punch was relevent nice...
Ha! Im starving to play, cuz on da ball court u are what u Say
Ya shots miss on the net, Ive always owned a 'Marvolous JAy'
this is kinda weak.. but still decent...
I done whored em in multi's, but marv smoke weed, i can Tell
Cause he came back for seconds..... and left with another "L"
LMAO i definitely liked this one for some reason...
U need 2 eave son, no beast on the beat, we dont Believe em
U only visit "trackmasters" when ya girl gets her Weave done
ahah Pretty Nice Bar here..
So say hello to Defeat......... and kiss goodbye your Streak
Nightmares? HA!....... america reads ya shit to fall Asleep
nice closer... i liked this...(silly internet geeks!!)

Okay So Overall: Hotshh you came pretty original... your punches were hitting hard the whole way thru.. also your flow and structure was on point.. you had plenty of personals.. your verse was pretty edgy and i enjoyed reading it.. the only line i wasnt feel too much was the basketball line.. it coulda been done better but hey it was still nice...

MarvJay:
Your Verse was nice.. but your structure is very hard to read.. also you have a tendency to come played on your punches this time you didnt do that as much.. the only thing i really dont care for are your punches like "Buzz in Da Hood" stuff like that just isnt really what i look for... overall your verse was decent i just dont think u had what it takes to edge out hot.. pz..

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