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Old 05-13-05, 12:23 AM   #15
Dabatos
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return to favor on this link plz..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=181447

listening: nice beat..

Verse 1: very nice flow.. lyrics is nice.. and good multi's..

Chorus: Um.. its okay.. no offense.. but u sound too sharp in this chorus.. if u a singer u know wut i mean.. and sorta seems like ur struggling.. n oh. n just noticed some parts in the chorus... ur voice is flat as well..

Verse 2: umm.. same

6/10
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