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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP:
Lol, start sounds like gospel music..
CALI ----------- Dont do the quiet higher pitched voice.. It dont sound good.. Sounds too feminin..
Umm, lyrics wernt bad, flow needs work to make it more easy listening sorta.. You need to try and make sure you write your words in such a way that people will always know where your going with the peice cause sometimes it seems like you drift off topic..
DV ------------- Aiight I think you still need a bit of work on delivery and articulation to make ya stuff sound more pro.. Nothing to really complain bout with ya lyrics tho, all sounded pretty nice.
Both jus keep workin on the shit and elevating.
Not a bad track, just needs polishing..
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