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Old 05-13-05, 09:53 AM   #12
AutoMatik
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From: Bronx NY............holla at me
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Voted For: Murdz

your shits prewritten and your structure more fucked, than pornstars/
you beating me in battle kid ha you pullin my string like,broke guatairs/
^no.....bad opener..
ya flows whack and your punches are worn out like,hand me downs/
take the rz out your name and you MUD like,wet pitchers mounds/
^????
you was never LYRICAL so how the fuck you calling yourself the PRODIGY/
and you can get MURDerd collector style,that means Ima do it hobboly/
^it was going good untill the end...
you failed to realize you was one step from being beat,like eggs/
I'm know for bringing tradgedy to the audeince like,shakespear plays/
^bad closer...it was forced..

^elevate..

overall:6.3/10
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Metaphor ain't gonna Be Shit after I slice-him-into-sections
bitch i got twice as many posts and I got twice-as-much-respect-son
^ummm no....bad opener..
you says "I'ma respectable vet" - shiiiiit, I'll be burnin'-this-liar
your wordplay's so "played out" I think your "verses-are-tired"
^ok.....
all the "dickrydaz" you got, I'd swear you were gettin "votes~from~faggots"
you post shit for no reason just to boast~your~status
^decent...
I'll smack-this-wanna be "vet" who demands-respect
your punches are like your Internet service - "Sorry, can't-connect"
^umm no...
I think your "spits are cheap" cuz they're "spoken~poorly"
I got this bitch to the point that he'll be votin'-for-me!!!
^so-so closer

^elevate.

overall:7.5/10

battle was overall basic..nothing speical..~1~