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Old 05-13-05, 10:07 AM   #20
AutoMatik
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Voted For: AckRite

Blayy Dyin From Punches, Lift Arm...No Sign Of Ya Pulse Kid
Only Time RV Dont Sleep On Ya Posts...We Unda Hypnosis!
^ummmm no...bad opener..
Audios? Last Time You 'Touched Tracs'...It Was On Ya Head
New To Text? But He 'Eat Pencils' Jus To 'Swallow Da Lead'!
^ok....this was forced like a bitch....
Blayy Dont Wanna See Round 2.....And Dis Battles My Proof
Im DEAD SERIOUS, Ur More 'Fit 4 A Loss" Than Funeral Suits!
^decent...
I AM Hip-Hop....Got This Homo's Road to Victory GridLocked
Asthmatic Wordplay, Bringin Dis MOTORMOUTH to a Pit-Stop!
^basic...
We Know I Own You In Text...You Vulnerable A Virgin Newbie
& I Got Blayy "Down 4 Tha COUNT"......Like Dracula Groupies!
^self glore..and basic closer...

^elevate..

overall:8.5/10
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Yeah... listen up "AckRite" betta get your "facks right"
Cuz I got a punch like Ali and this is just my first "fight"
^just stop....
I ain't even gon lie tho, I'm feelin ya sig and Cass is right
He's a hustla, but you're not so stop actin like ya shit is tight
^basic....
Compare us to airlines, im "fly" like first class im ridin "top flight"
Your shit about to crash homie, this bout to be your "burial site"
^no....
Aiight, enough with that one rhyme this off the head its about time
Somebody hit the site with a real battle, murderin cats consistently like "organized crime"
^no....
Oh shit, i've already written 8 lines? That means minus this one got one more to make this battle mine
Im fixin to put you to sleep right here kid like this your fuckin "nursery rhyme"
^horrible closer..

^elevate..

overall:4.7/10..

basic battle nothin big or serious...~1~