peepin... beat is gurlish.... cali this is tha worst delivery you've ever brought.. i mean yea its spose to be an emotional track but you can bring emotion thru different ways tahn makin ur voice sooo high pitched.. the hook is pretty cool i like tha samples... dv comes in nycely this is probaly one of tha best deliveries ive heard from him he's on tha beat reaaaaaallll welll... damn u soundin like a fuckin true ass man here u can tell this is comin from tha heart.... DAMN! dv that was tah best shit ive ever heard u spit no joke man! that was amazing realest shyt...... damn dv if i were u i would leave ur verse n fill tha first one by urself n put it on a demo for urself... def felt dv on this that shyt was spectacular i think cali kinda brought this track down i was expecting more following up on foolish pricks but this was a let down on ur part...

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