Voted For: iLL Cee

CA$per

Opener…
Ill cee wow 3 winz,how u gonna talk bout no flow…
When 1 of tha three wins was a fuckin no show….
^coo personal as opener

U talk a whole lot but not much decisive action….
I just cut your rymes in half like an improper fraction…
^no punch but nice wordplay

U say livin legendz is wack,but your green with envy….
And that played out line,how many times u say im friendly….
^not really feeling it...

Closer…..
Enough wasted text on this kid,hes not even competion….
Cause I shifted your ryme around,like automatic transmissionz
^good wordplay, again no punch though

Nice verse but your biggest problem here is that you have very good wordplay, good creativity but you lack to turn it into a hardhitting punch. You have mad potentialm if you can turn that creative thinking into bold personals and punches. Had your flow on lock, structure as well as vocab were excellent.


iLL Cee

Finnally after a Couple nights of Pre-Written ur Rdy to Lose..
Its a Wonder how u get Votes poeple see ur Shit and Hit Snooze..
^hehe, dope opener

Now its time for u to lose ya "Pride" Cause im the Next Mufasa Right..
Being Dead dont make u safe from me,Cause ill Merk ya in the AfterLife..
^lmao, nice personal

How did you get in the LL crew..Is there somethin that i'm Missin..
I mean how is it that a fuckin ghost could even be considered Livin..
^rofl...funny shit...

Take my Knife..Split ya Bars Cause You cant come 1/2 As hard As-Me..
You just wasted Time Batllin me Cause its obvious im a Better Artist-See..
^okay closer

Nice verse right here man! You stayed consistent with the hardhitting punches and the dope personals, good creatvity and wordplay in there. I was feeling your flow, your structure was good and you found a good balance in your vocabulary. Keep it up man!

My vote goes to iLL Cee, sorry CA$per...no hate but you got outclassed...

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