Voted For: Acuity

wow its pretty clear aquity got this one.... ughh calm i can tell ur talented but u just dont really have a style i look for when reading topicals.. i look more for a story.. and ur really just speaking on ur feelings.... acuity you had nice emotion and good feeling the whole way thru.. the only thing is ur a major vocab user and that really bothers me because it seems as though ur using vocab to make up for ur loss of emotion but hey.. u still have a very good verse and ur imagery and emotion is what edged u out.. calm good job just not my style.. pz

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