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This was a pretty good drop, seen you do alot better
Structure was good, flow was on point ,alittle shacky in the middle
Wordplay and vocab was alittle to simplistic for me..
Felt it could have been alot better...
You had okay feeling , and good imagery ..
Nice concept , nice very creative topic ,
seen you do alot better , keep it up
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