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Old 05-14-05, 09:37 AM   #22
K-Trini
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From: N.Y./born in Trinidad
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Voted For: AutoMatik

This bitch is wack, Jus admit it cause its true soon
Ill put so many sparks tah your verse...
^^not a punch
They'll come up with a New Blue Mooon
You dun throw punches, buh go head start tah fight dude
^^doesn't seem like a punch
Cause..Im so Cold, you can say i have a heart of ice cubes!
Knockin yah lights out, You can't Bare tah Move..
^^can ya please humilate the oppenent or at least attempt to
This Kid wouldn't have 2 Souls..If he had a Pair of Shoes
Im droppin weights on your verse jus tah pound your game
^^wtf?
Cause its going no where, except down the Drain
Your punches are missin me, Its Dumber Tah Take hits
And...
^^wak
Ill put u in so much blackless, u'll hide under the Blankets..

Conclusion-ok.....you didn't read the tutorials.Ur shit didn't seem to a be batle rap.Flow sucked...I don't even recall seeing one punchline.No hate..but you need work.

I Make You Bleed In Cry Of Ya Livin Soul That I Caught....
You Winning This Battle Is The Only Time I Get Scary Thawghtz...(nameplay)
^^^Mediocre...not really insulting.
Your Wack And Theres No Explaintion For Why Ur So Wack....
But If Your A Alias,I See The Reason You Came Back!.....
^^ain't feelin this
After This Battle You Betta Quote What I Said....
Cuz You Hold No Heat...when Your Hold PENCIL LEAD!!...
^^^ wak
Heres A Lost To Get Ya On Ya Way.....
Ur So Wack,Ya Skill Don't Even Look MY WAY!...
^^wak
As You See I Didn't Try,It Was A Quicky I Layed out.....
Watch You Get K.O'ed Like Nas Riped Jigga Out!!.....
^^played out to death.

Conclusion-ur shit was weak...but you ain't need much to win this.All you needed was a battle rap verse.Cause your oppenent didn't even have 1 punchline.I'll give ya props for at least posting a battle verse.

Vote-Automatik(vote in my battle dawg)

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