Originally Posted by October 4th

u gots mad potential fam...but ya shit right now is "hmmm"...i mean, structure was off...iight flow...and for ya 1st joint (i think) u need touch ups...like lose tha "//" and tha end of ya lines, i know they lines, dont tell me...lol...stay up and do u tho...jus know if a "vet" comes in here...he might eat u up...

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