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..::God Of Destruction::..
From: I F0rg0t...h0l 0n lemme think |
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IP:
Voted For: AckRite
nice verse homie,wordplay nice punches very creative! vocab nice, structure readable...ya opener was comedy son,u came off wild, i like dat.and ya closer was slick,couldve been better.
Armada ya rhyme scheme was lightweight off at times and it lost me.U were strechin ya bars alot. Lil bit of elevvation wouldnt hurt it,and bring out them punches.nice job tho.
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