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Old 05-14-05, 12:26 PM   #8
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Hot shit, structure was good. But the message and rhyme scheme was really damn good. Good job, fav lines:

Reconsidering my thoughts, actually it was more than a few,
Wish i had known the result of an attempted abortion,
Before spendin a fortune tryna believe i'm important to you,

Nice drop..
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