Peace, Love, Unity
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Hahahahahahahaha
That was fuckin dope. Seems like something me and my friends would take about. But it was good. Nice structure, good vocab., and what not. Kept me reading because the whole idea of a teddy bear about to kill someone makes me laugh. But it was a decent drop. Good way to tell the story too. 7/10
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88 miles per hour should do it.
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