Voted For: b-gurl

confidential's here to show his 'potential'
its consequential* that i fuck up his credentials
he didnt realise that wen i spit-its torrential**
like a Rain storm,'pac-a-mac', its essential
2 beat this bitch,im so hot -im 'quintessential'***
didnt take much thot, hes 'in-consequential'****
callin evry1 out, actin big and 'presidential!'
hate 2 mention boi, but ur rhymes r 'non influential'
=7/10 a ok verse just make ya lines longer n it will be alot better..........

vs

u a female emcee so actually i admire-when
u rhyme, cuz slang gotta be hard to understand when u live in ireland....

b-gurl i aint want to do this, but getting fuck was part of the plan
but u aint worth the money in the bank..just the money on hand *HA*

if we was locked in a studio i would walk off in hanf-cuff for verbal-rape
cuz ya best spit comes after u swallow....plus i got it on tape

u said u'r crib was nice but now I can tell that u fibbed though
If u don't live in a trailor then why r there tail lights in ur window? *HA*

Sike that aint ur pad, but u aint lettin the truth come out either
Cuz u just snapped a pic on the job where u work as a house cleaner
http://community.rapverse.com/attac...achmentid=11056

N fuck ya spit, cuz its the crabs on ya pussy that got me scared
diminished in strength, i'll leave u verbally impaired BITCH....
=6.5/10 also an ok verse but alot of it didnt ryhme..........

v/b-gurl..........

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