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Old 05-14-05, 12:57 PM   #6
morse code
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Voted For: Pumpkin Head

Listen here fag, this may not be halloween, but I've got this shit "in the bag".
Don't brag, the only time you get a "pat on the back" is when you're "playing tag".
6/10...good punches on both lines, nice opener..structure was bad though
It's easy to tell my rhymes confuse him easily because his "head is hollow".
Studying a tardling's anatomy I'll "carve up this bitch", to see the "red that follows."
6/10...okay punches bad structure
Trust me, you suck but I can be optimistic --- I see it's fucking "half of a cup".
The probability of you winning this match? Better chance seeing "Roseanne do a pull-up".
6/10...good punches again but bad structure
I was looking for a pro battle, and this lame ass faggots the only one who humored me.
Never here "pumpkin on audio", because this stupid shit is still struggling with puberty.
5/10...wack
23/40
58%

work on your structure and flow, nice punches throughout but your structure and flow were terrible

Once again an LFS battle comin straight at ya computer screen,
I'm in a battle with Kein Witz but his wits seem not to be keen,*
6/10...decent opener
It's good that he has self-esteem, but he over-extended himself,
But from the info in his profile, he's unknown even to himself,**
6/10...decent
His chances of winning is low, similar to 50 Cent's sperm count,***
We know he didn't buy a ghost write, he doesn't have a bank account,
7/10...good
Whoo here we go, I sense it, my verse is startin to get a little hectic,
I like this dude but his decision skills show that he isn't too eclectic,****
5/10..eehh
Sorry but you shoulda stayed in the closet like old-fashioned murphy beds,
Cuz in the end of the battle 'I stand alone' amidst the 'Puddles Of Red',*****
7/10...good personals and werdplay
Hate to break it to ya but me losin to battle is not happenin, it's taboo,
Dictatin my verse like Adolf Hitler, you take the role of the wanderin Jew,******
6/10...good punch but bad structure
Simply put I'm better than you, but don't worry I won't rub it in too badly,
But if you ask for another shot at me, I'll offer you the rematch, gladly....
5/10...eehh
42/70
60%
decent verse but try to pick better werds and also try not to have fillers or bars that dont ahve punches at all

opener:kw
closer:kw
punches:LFS
personals:LFS
flow:LFS
structure:LFS
vocab:tie
multies:tie


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